Saturday, March 10, 2012

What kind of Poems are these 3??(Lyric, free verse, Ballad, ect.) Thanks!?

1st:

When life began, was our fate already written?

When i was young, why was i never bothered?

So thoughtless to even worry about what my fate is

I was blithe about anything that was around me



Now i started learning and thinking about my fate

What has brought me here and where i am going

I just drive along the flow of life,

where i know that a fate is waiting for me



I felt in love, I did what ever i could to keep her happy

But i broke my heart when i knew she loved someone

I got miserable, i did everything i could for her

But i know, i my fate was to live without her



I dont know what is my fate for tomorrow

When will i understand life's nature

Where my fate will take me

But i still dream, where i make my own fate

A fate where i know how it ends

A fate where i become happy

2nd:

I remember the day we me

I remember it all too well

I remember how we started

And I remember how we ended

I remember how it feels with

Your lips touching mine

I remember what it's like in your arms

I remember what you told me

I remember what I promised

I remember that day we spent together

I remember all my tears

I remember those pictures of us

I remember you used to wait

For me after every class

I remember what you said to me

I remember how much it hurt

I remember asking wondering why

I remember our last kiss

I remember you walking away

I remember my life being sucked out

I remember my heart going with you

I remember all the pain you put me through

I remember, do you?

3rd:

Memory



You walked in to my life,

But just like that,

You walked back out,

Still you will be a memory,

A memory that I have created in my mind,

Still you will be a memory,

A memory that will always be locked,

Away in my heart and my mind,

I will always have a memory of you in my heart,

And I will always carry that picture of you in my mind,

Still you will be a memory,What kind of Poems are these 3??(Lyric, free verse, Ballad, ect.) Thanks!?
After that, I do not wish to remembah anything, anymore!
Why do you repeat a word so many times, people?
It looks like an everyday diary, kept by a nice sentimental young woman, but as a poem needs improvement. Do not repeat words, try to use them once or twice and that is max.

As for the genres in poetry they are far too many:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Ge鈥?/a>

Take many looks and copy-paste any info you would consider helpful!

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